Full IELTS Writing Task 2 essay | STRUCTURE, TASK, SAMPLE ANSWER (Part 1 – Task Response)

Shouldn't you put a comma after "In reality, many fresh graduate…"?

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Coming to the essay question.. The question talks about factors which implies more than one probable cause but in your answer you have discussed only one factor and that is outdated education system, don't you think that's a mistake?

EDIT : now that I read the essay again… outdated education system is mentioned as the primary cause or factor, you have used that as a base.. moving on you mentioned two sub factors
Education is too theoretical and colleges promoting popular courses such as law and business.

I can address all these answers but I find it very difficult to write 250 word only can write 30 words

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You demonstrate how to write an essay, but I still don't know how to develop these ideas. Whatever, thanks a lot

Why did you use a lot of phrasal verb in your essay? Is it OK?

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How much (band score) this essay (in the video) will get?

"When young people ARE CHOOSING what subject to study …" ??? Why you used present continuous? You are not talking about an action happening right now.

How to create ideas about writing task 2 topic

In another video you said avoid starting sentences with THERE IS !
And in this you say do so!
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Good one, on the second sentence in the first paragraph, I suggest you include a comma after "…reality"

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Is there and upper word limit for the writings task 1,2. if the word limit goes around or above 200 and 300 for task 1 and 2 respectively, will it effect our band score?

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Typical problem-solution or cause- solution essay this is in my opinion the easiest to approach. What I did iny last IELTS was using a strategy like this:

Cause 1—> solution 1
Cause 2—> solution 2
Cause 3—> solution 3

Causes go in one paragraph, solution in the other one.

Conclusion: just rephrase my self

Intro just paraphrase. Then say something like "Some roots to this phenomenon and solutions will be provided"

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IELTS Vocabularies with explanations would be better

I like your videos, it does give clear directions, but in one part you've confused me. The previous video you told us not to start a sentence with "Ther is" but now you gave us an example of "there are" as the beginning of the sentence (11:50)

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Isn't it wrong to write opinion in your conclusion?

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Its so intersting. I really understood what should be done and i am so anxious to get it down and see if it matches with the steps you just taught. Thank you so much Asyia

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Also, I do a lot of listening test but, I get only 20 point in each of them. What should I do to improve my listening, especially for me hard is 3-4 part of listening.

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