IELTS Writing Task 2 | PROBLEM / SOLUTION ESSAY with Jay!

Nowadays, many individuals has sicknesses which are affecteded by stress.

In recent years, the number of people suffering from illnesses as a result of stress as increased sporadically. This essay will discuss the causes of stress-related sicknesses including prolonged working hours and increased job pressures. It will also suggest solutions to these problems including improving one's work-life and diet. People are working longer hours than ever before, so they have more job responsibilities. They put up with these unfavorable conditions because of the competitive workforce and to better their careers. For example, an average marketer with a monthly target would work around the clock to meet up with expectations. These… Read more »

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i think there is repetition of one idea or 2 ideas all over the essay ..

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nowadays sicknesses that are caused by life stress are dramatically becoming high. this essay will discuss the main causes of stress-related sicknesses including losing jobs and as well as the unbalance between payment of wages and the incredible price increase on kinds stuffs that are needed for day to day life. it will also suggest solutions on how to tackle them including improving job opportunity besides the need for government interference in controlling the price or increasing salaries accordingly.

Stress disorder leads to so many diseases nowdays.

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Stress related illness rates are growing up and up.

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Nowadays, diseases associated to stress are getting incredibly popular among people.

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Jay, I don’t know if it true but I think there is a logic problem in the cause paragraph. I think our task is to prove why “working long hours causes stress-related sickness”, while you spent the main part of the paragraph proving “why people spending long hours working.” You only simply mention the relationship between long-hours working and illness in the conclude sentence of the paragraph.
Anybody feels the same?
I’d really like to know your response to this.
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Hey Jay so causes has to be relevant because you seem to use one reason to explain two causes altogether. What if the causes we wrote are not that related?

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I believe it will be 9 solid if the simple sentences are combined to compound. I have been following and studying your post..nice work jay

Jay, I watched this video 2 days before I wrote and got this problem solution type essay and I think I aced it. Best essay I have ever written. If I get an 8 I'm putting money in your account because you got me that score. Thank you. I will let you know on the 15th of March

Can you please take some time and suggest improvements to my essay ? I am particularly doubtful of the solutions as they are something to be done by the country in general and not the individual. Want to check if this structure is fine to have. How much can I expect to score in IELTS if had written this? It is observed that growing number of people are suffering from stress concerned issues. This essay will discuss the main reasons of the stress borne diseases including tough competition for employment and lack of a healthy social life. This essay will… Read more »

what if writing problem and solution in the same paragraph

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from my experience, I think the thesis statement should be unannounced. Can you clarify why it should be announced?

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